Hopeless

Hopeless

A Poem by Dragonwing
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Never give up hope

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I gave up my hope
Life is as dark as the night
But then I saw light

© 2019 Dragonwing



Author's Note

Dragonwing
Please tell me if you like this or not. If this is really bad then I might have to stop doing poetry.

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Short, sweet but a lovely positive message in the end.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Dragonwing

3 Days Ago

Thanks, do you think I should've kept it all gloomy?
Dawn

3 Days Ago

Not its perfect. I enjoyed it a whole lot. Nothing at all wrong with it. :)
Dragonwing

2 Days Ago

Thank you again Dawn.
Lovely poem 😊💛 Short but very meaningful and true. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.
-Angelina 🖤

Posted 2 Months Ago


So much was said in just those sentences.. It is brilliant

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dragonwing

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
Short and strong.
The rhythm carries through each line and the end rhymes give it a nice kick.


Posted 2 Months Ago


Dragonwing

3 Days Ago

Thank you for the review.
A strong personal comment, and so true to those who can find that light. Many times we are our own worst enemies until we figure out that we should love ourselves first no matter what the world thinks. Great job!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dragonwing

2 Months Ago

Thanks for the review. I agree with you that we can be our worst enemies and the rest. This is a gre.. read more
Honestly, sometimes the shortest poems can pack the most powerful of punches. Yes, it was only three lines however it cuts deep and certainly makes one think. I personally can relate to this piece and have been there where I've wanted to just... "give up" however just before pressing that fateful red button, seeing the light and realizing that though hope seemed lost, "Hope" once more was gained. Honestly, this piece is nice and allows for reflection. I like it. Definitely enjoyed this one.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Don't give up writing. Keep reading and practicing. Brevity which gives a strong message.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Gent Called Alex

2 Months Ago

Well said! Just a wonderfully concise as the poem!
I really enjoyed this write, intriguing

Posted 2 Months Ago


I really enjoyed this. Among my first thoughts reading it were those about perspective...and choices. Perhaps a bit on the deep side, hehe, but I've certainly been in places where I "gave up" myself. That was a choice. It doesn't always seem like it, ya know? It sometimes seems like there is no choice...in that circumstance where it is dark in our lives. We don't choose to snap out of it sometimes until we see that light again :-)

The vibe is very encouraging and seems to stem from your own personal experience, which I'm glad of. Even though it's awful that you may have experienced such a "night" in your life, I'm happy that you see light too.

It's short, and simple. But you say so much in very few words. Relateable. Well done.

Best,
-Alex



Posted 2 Months Ago


Dragonwing

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the review, I want to say more but I don't know how, just thanks.

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