Eternal Love

With one glance I knew you should be mine

Though at first you ignored me

You soon saw what i still see

Something between us that can never be described

Something which noone understands but us

And although we are apart nothing has changed

The connection, the fire, the love is still there

We've gone through so much in such little time

That it makes me feel as if iv'e known you forever

And i wish to know you longer still

Theres a sense of secruity around you

to which i feel around noone else

In your eyes i see how much you care about me

The slightest touch of your body sends me into shock

To see you picture makes me want to be in your arms

Without you is something I never want to think about

Because I wouldn't know what to do if you were gone

You are my everything,

You are my world.

Reviews

[Tasha]

this was beautiful. keep it up. :)

[Dark Angel ~]

Maybe I relate to so many of these poems because I'm a romantic... and I've been thru pain because of my love... That's probably it... Yeah...
Beautiful ^^

[quinfinn]

beautiful...

[unknown]

This is sweet :)

[Art]

that is surely love you are writing about..one can see how the effect is grasping you..hope its still there...

[Katannaism]

Short; but lovely and very expressive. A few typos though.
line 13: how, got typed 'ho'.
line 15: your*

And at the last two lines I would've wrote you're (you are) your is to say that is theirs.

Other than that, lovely poem. Keep it up!