Stole My Thunder

Another one that's not the best. At least i think it isn't.

I sit here in my lack of wonder
Wondering who stole my thunder
thunder sounds as I go under
Under storms that stole my thunder

I, my child.  I be wild
Wilderness is nature's child
Child of wild is worth your while
you should trust my lack of style

Wonder when there's time to plunder
Plunder!  Find my stolen thunder
Thunder is what makes me hunger
Hunger stops the going under

Reviews

[White-Inked Pen]

Oh i like this! kinda sounds like a rap style.. intense piece. Well done.

[Sukriti Suki]

I really liked this...it comes across as all over the place but then, if you really READ it makes real perfect, wonderful sense. I absolutely loved the line ' you should trust my lack of style' because it made me smile when I was deep in thought...I find this work very clever.