We

This is a poem I wrote after the first time I met the biggest inspiration in my life. Its about how people are just, well people. This is the first poem I have ever published.

We.

All we mankind are, is contained within our flesh and bone.

With blood running through our veins to out beating hearts,

with brilliance scattering across our minds,

creating and moulding tomorrow. 

Some of our mankind, although,

take it upon ourselves to do something different

to change the world and shape our collective future.

This is all done to inspire our successors, 

to create our destiny,

and to evolve possibilities out of mere fundaments.

Impossible is only in the eye of the ignorant.

Possibility is the dreamers reality.

Push my bones to breakage.

Sacifice blood from my veins.

Fail some of my scattered brilliance,

to create my destiny.

Inspire the future of my fellow mortal beings and all the beings to come.

I am one and only one.

My future uncertain, 

but nothing is out of my grasp.

However,

one is a number,

impossible is only a word.

Life is the outcome of many uncertain events. 

Although many of the small, 

seemingly unimportant, 

things in life are the greatest.

All the events in life mould us to become who we are destined to be.

Fundaments,

created for the greater good of mankind,

and the greater of oneself as an independent human being.

With blood running through veins,

our imagination and mind, 

we are exactly as we shall be.

- Daniel Andersson 

  23/11/2013

 

Author's Note

I don't mind what you think of the grammar, or the spelling. I feel it conveys what is meant to be read.

Note: This is my original writing. It is copyright protected. Daniel Andersson 23/11/2013

Reviews

[Ees]

Nice imagery- makes it a bit raw and really human feeling. Great job with that!
Interesting concepts contained within your writing. I have been posing the question to myself lately about the ability of singular people being able to change things and foster and create. In your poem, you make clear your own beliefs on that subject matter, you believe that it can be done.

"Life is the outcome of many uncertain events"- I really enjoyed that line in particular.

There is a lot of truth in this.

Great writing, I enjoyed it. It was easy to read and that counts for a good poem for me- it works, doesn't make you stop and look at the writing, because you want to continue reading to get at the meaning within.

nice work!

[Dreamers.Reality]

Thank you for reviewing Ees!

Yea its a tricky, mind boggling questioning. I definitely believe a person can make an extraordinary difference to the large masses.

[Ees]

I agree with that. It is a hard concept to grasp at the same time. and no prob. nice work.