Adrift

I look into the space above
and ponder how to feel the love
of my creator though I'm lonely
drifting through the sky.

For the galaxy I'm reaching
as the Earth below me teaching
me on life and dying only
as I'm passing by.

I see the stars around me shine
as planets with the sun align
to keep its light from my tomorrow
as the answers die.

Into the darkness I am falling
when the day that you stopped calling
came to me in all its sorrow
taking you from I.

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[Thepensiveplayer]

I feel like we are drifting through life and sometimes just going through the motions. I look at life like a marathon with an invisible finish line. We'll never know when its time to go, but its fun to run for as long as we can with new companions along the way. At the same time, we never forget those we've lost because I'd say the tag of life has an infinite cost. Your poem puts me in the mindset of mediation and trying to find peace. Its pretty interesting and keep up the work.