Release

I feel the day evaporate
into the waves that touch profound.

I cannot help but contemplate
this sacred place that I have found.

For when it moves through me
vibrating deep into
my hungry mind.

I feel it all in ecstasy-
I feel there's nothing left
to find.

I disappear into the moment
lifting me from off the ground.

I take a trip, but never move
when drowning deep inside the sound.

For when it moves through me
pulsating deep within my
troubled mind.

I feel it all in harmony-
I feel some hope for humankind.

Reviews

[Taino]

Incredibly relaxing poem to read. It leaves you with a sense of hope. Excellent job!

[RBrmdz]

This hit home for me seriously. I wonder if my interpretation is correct....it reminds me of getting high or listening to music lol i feel the same either way. It flows very nicely which i find hard to make happen.

[Karmee]

This is really good, quite intriguing too.

[Penwhill]

That was gorgeous. Truly lovely. Good job!