When I met you..

When I met you..

A Poem by Melody
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A poem about when i met.... you.

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When I saw you I was afraid to meet you.

When I met you I was afraid to kiss you.

When I kissed you I was afraid to love you.

Now I love you and I'm afraid to lose you.

<3

© 2012 Melody



Author's Note

Melody
When I wrote this I was thinking about him

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That's adorable :) I like how each line is linked to the previous, helps it flow.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love this poem. Beautiful writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Short and sweet. Nice job. :)
-Aud

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wonderful and so true.
Sounds like the chorus for a song.
We have all been there.
I say after much heartbreak, "Don't let another person define your value on this earth."
Good work. Keep writing


Posted 1 Year Ago


Very beautiful. I love the way that this flows.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Welcome to WC sweetie....

I look forward to reading you. Your bio is perfect. Be yourself, write what you want...and you'll find yourself with quite the following, not to mention...meet some lifelong friends.

Muse

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful little write...

Amazing job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a sweet poem. Wonderful job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melody
Melody

Miami, FL



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