Jon

Jon

A Poem by Graveyardfuck
"

Jon, if you're reading this...

"
He hates when I write like this
He doesn't think of it as poetry
There is no rhyme or rhythm 
Just stanzas
But I'm okay with that
He jokes a lot
And smiles
Oh what an adorable smile
I insult him 
And then I tell him I love him
I feel like he's my best friend
But my lover, too
He makes me food
And hugs me tight
I'm so short
And he teases me all the time
I love his stubble
And how he kisses so hard
His dimples are so cute
I can't help but run my fingers through his hair
He always has to work
But he works hard
I have school
We don't see each other but once a week maybe
We don't talk everyday
I know he's always tired
I try not to let his absence get to me
He tries so hard to please me and his family and his boss
I feel like I'm just weighing him down
He says I'm the one that got his heart to work again
He's always so cheesy like that
I can't fathom why he chose me 
The age difference
The way I look
I'm so awkward
Never know the right things to say
The silence
I'm not easy to love
But he holds me
With those long, strong arms 
And kisses me
And smiles
And tells me he loves me
And I melt
I melt
Jon
If you're reading this
I apologize for my scattered, rhyme-less poetry
And my self confidence issues
And that I'm so young we can't see each other much
But I hope
That you'll stick with me 
Because maybe I can find a way to rhyme all this nonsense 
With you here 

© 2014 Graveyardfuck


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I don't know why this hit me so wonderfully. Usually, poetry to me is open to interpretation; it doesn't tell a story. This is a definite exception. Maybe it's because I have someone in my life like this. Maybe it's because the emotions you evoked are so pure. They're true, and honest; that's why it flowed so beautifully.

Aside from the piece, I wish you the best of luck in your relationship. I support you, and I hope you last. "Love is one soul inhabiting two people."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Graveyardfuck

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Danielle
Your reviews make my day
Danielle Anatomyy

9 Years Ago

No, thank you. Really, that means a lot coming from you.



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Update:
We broke up at the end of June

Posted 9 Years Ago


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JC
great poem, so real and so honest and bare...to hell with rhymes, this is true art.

Posted 9 Years Ago


JC

9 Years Ago

whats not to like?
Graveyardfuck

9 Years Ago

A lot of things
JC

9 Years Ago

s**t, sometimes I think I am a monster, a reckless idiot, a specter, a rodent that belongs in the ga.. read more
I like the approach,the almost spoken words, has its own rhythm and rhyme. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


AHH, this was really good. I think you should have the upmost confidence! :) relationships are always something to work on and particularly never really easy, however, in the long run its all worth it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I don't know why this hit me so wonderfully. Usually, poetry to me is open to interpretation; it doesn't tell a story. This is a definite exception. Maybe it's because I have someone in my life like this. Maybe it's because the emotions you evoked are so pure. They're true, and honest; that's why it flowed so beautifully.

Aside from the piece, I wish you the best of luck in your relationship. I support you, and I hope you last. "Love is one soul inhabiting two people."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Graveyardfuck

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Danielle
Your reviews make my day
Danielle Anatomyy

9 Years Ago

No, thank you. Really, that means a lot coming from you.

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Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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