Run Away

i have find the Moountain tops are so peaceful

 I can’t take it no more! I feel trapped

And nowhere to be

Every day is a

Struggle to

Be.

Want to see the

Crisp Mountain tops.

Just no life in this area

Just so much grayness

Around here

All there is so much sadness in this place.

I feel like I should be up in the mountain where

I can feel like be on the

Top the world.

 The feeling of peace

Just run away

 

Reviews

[Liz Rutledge]

Nicely done.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, different in a way, I really like this. Enjoyed.

[Tai Ryens]

I do feel that you could have rephrased some lines to sound better and more clearer to the reader, but despite that, I still understood this nicely. You explain the struggle for peace in an amazing way, and the images it painted onto my mind are wonderfully done.
Well-done, keep penning!