Faerie

Faerie

A Poem by Drifting Blue
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At last, the iceberg moves

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1
There is a cinnamon smell to the air
A razor blade smell
Cutting through all others
Roses repose in their beds
And the unseen magnolia blossoms
Declare their presence.
 
Diving down into the
Funereal reaches of the night wind
We crossed into faerie with ease
Riding dandelion and marigold.
 
2
You turn in your sleep
Settling again into the mound of pillows
As I listen to the sounds of flowers
Unfolding, uneasy, unnoticed
But for me.
Your soft breathing tells tales
Of dreams.
Deep down
You know.
 
3
Hints of her identity,
The slightest brushing of small wings
And I am mad with the secret
The inability to tell.
Suspension of disbelief
I am mad with the secret
The voice of tiny wings.
 
Outside the drastic conditions of a life
Whose only attraction is escape from it
Whose only satisfaction is clear dread
After all the ancillary matters that crowd
Hints of fantasy.
I am made with the knowing.
 
4
Often the centre is dismissed for the margins
The mentor mind exchanged for the story teller.
I can take you there.
 
 
I go to a place that brings water to deserts
Imagines wildness where there is tame
Guarded by faerie
 
Here you can  look at me again
Admire my spontaneity
And remember there is more to life
 
5
You have mistaken my boredom for disease
My mind wishes to be outside the walls
To find the bridge where vows were made
Where promises were kept
 
I find the crescent moon a wonder
As Venus and Mars take their places in the sky
But vision is blocked by the lights of the city
Extinguishing the light that matters
Leaving the sky a dull gray.
 
Go back outside
The slide, the swing
Go and see
Remember the toy box.
 
 

© 2008 Drifting Blue


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Very emotional. So wonderfully written and presented. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I was in tears after reading this poem; it is so moving and it is very powerful. Your metaphors are intense. I feel this poet/poem is who I could relate to on so many levels. This reads like a song, the sorrow and despair and all the polarities. One minute you are in this fairyland, the next back to normal every day life. And the difference of it becomes blurred through this poem. So many thoughts ran through my head as I read your poem, so it is harder to comment when overwhelmed by the poem's richness.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Drifting Blue
Drifting Blue

Bad Lands, NC



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Poet, Short Story writer. Insane. Little by little, we reveal everything. The itch is just too great to be anonymous. Who I am is what I write and vice versa. You'll see. Riding The Waterfall: The W.. more..

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