Dreams Can Sometimes Be For Real Too

Dreams Can Sometimes Be For Real Too

A Poem by Sweet & Tender Hooligan
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Think James Dean & Natalie Wood and just think, if the universe had really ended. Then they would never have even spent a single day together.

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Away from everything...
Is where I can be, really be me.
Because I've always got 
(my) dreams to live for.
Away from you...
Is where my dreams reside,
Even though I'm far from you. Inside,
I'm never really alone, beside (the) you (in me).
To see away all your sadness,
The truth of the truth is...
I just want things to be more real, 
Which makes the truth hard to live with.
Never really away from the past
(or the future) sooner or later... 
One day will have to become 
More than just a dream.

© 2010 Sweet & Tender Hooligan


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I love the last stanza. Very nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really great and i liked the way you write it, putting things in perenthesis (not sure if i spelled that right). great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot! There really is nothing bad about this. Loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gotta keep dreaming and living!
A great poem love, excellent use of wording!
Awesome
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your use of parentheses is astounding. Ooo nice word choice.....in your poem too. That is also astounding.
It was short but it had a slow enough movement/flow that it seemed much longer. Good job.....no, wait, Astounding job.
PBP

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice write. well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like your unique perspective ~ well composed poetic~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


live....?
hurm...
good one...

Posted 13 Years Ago


OMG! SOOOOOOO TRUE I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
okay sorry game face critic times :)
I like it It portrays much emotinal character I enjoy this poem to the fullest
100% for you luv it!
-ajm
PLZ REVIEW MY STUFF 2!:)
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: James Dean, Natalie Wood, dreams, time, what if, truth, sadness, hard, love, longing, alone, past, future, wishes, one day

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Sweet & Tender Hooligan
Sweet & Tender Hooligan

Newport, South Wales, United Kingdom



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I'm Russell from Wales. I've been writing for many years. Writing is important to me and its my only reason for being on this site. I like to take my time on my poems and I hope to keep learning an.. more..

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