Distant

Written during the summer between 8th and 9th grade.

Words on the tip of my tongue,

are you there to hear them?

Searching in a sea of people

for your face,

familiar yet faint.

Your potential to make my heart burst

is all that I need.

Reviews

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ok your bio freaked me out a little because you write much older tha your age. this poem is a good example.

i would really love for you to take a look at my short novel. i can't send you a free copy, but you can download one for cheap. see what you think. and as for your writing, i can learn alot from you and i have been doing this for years and years and...

tristan
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[Kyle Francisco]

absolutely amazing kid. I love it...it seems to cross my mind from time to time and you personify it so simply. So serene...