Unwind (So Damn Beautiful)

Unwind (So Damn Beautiful)

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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8/31/2009.

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Cruising tonight with a velvet glow,

wind beneath your nails tingle in your toes.

Where it goes hell no one knows,

but you know


that it’s so damn beautiful.

So goddamn beautiful.

 

Bust that bottle and take a toll,

take a little time and just let it flow.

Making up for the time you stole,

but if you say it’s so;


just don’t tell me it ain’t beautiful,

cause it’s so damn beautiful.

 

You’ve got so much going for you,

you’ve got this freedom in a tune,

you can let it all unwind or just break off.


So give this life just one more chance,

take some time for love, skip the romance,

and maybe this time it will be enough,


cause it’s so damn beautiful.

So damn beautiful.

 

Early riser just to see the sun rise,

stay up late, hanging moon in the sky.

Got your speakers up and the time is right,

so back up, cause why;


cause it’s so damn beautiful.

So goddamn beautiful.

 

And when it gets dark yeah you can cry,

but it’s moments like these and I know just why.

Feel it soft but strong luminescent sky,

and let out a sigh;


cause it’s so damn beautiful.

Just so goddamn beautiful.

 

You’ve got so much going for you,

you’ve got this freedom in a tune,

you can let it all unwind or just break off.


So give this life just one more chance,

take some time for love, skip the romance,

and maybe this time it will be enough,


cause it’s so damn beautiful.

So damn beautiful.

 

So damn beautiful -

(Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop,

highway, no way, sweet talk, let’s rock.

Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop,

highway, no way, sweet talk, let's rock.)


Just so goddamn beautiful -

(Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

highway, no way, sweet talk, let’s rock.

Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop

Highway, no way, sweet talk, let's rock.)

 

Sidewalk, concrete, black road, blacktop,

highway, no way, sweet talk, let’s rock.

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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Cee
This is beautiful! Honestly I am just blown away. You did a wonderful job, I wish I could hear what it actually sounds like as a song. I'm sure it's incredible! I hope to see more from you soon.

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