Show Me What You Got

Show Me What You Got

A Poem by DuffyDreamer
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Just read you fool

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Jeez! 

To all who read my words I must say...

You're psychotic and I love it.

My work is ramblings from an unordinary but pathetic human.

Regardless, ya'll seem to eat up misery with a big spoon and I just keep dispensing. 

We are all sick here, no judgement. But I do think I need to write something of value for you all soon.

Bare with me. Or don't.

God, I want all of your brutal hate, judgement and honestly. 

Show me what you got.

© 2018 DuffyDreamer



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I can't hate, or judge, but I can be honest.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


DuffyDreamer

2 Weeks Ago

Fair enough
I like this write, Duffy....

Inviting amateurs to criticise your work is a dangerous invitation! We all want to grow as writers and poets, but there is nothing worse than to be nitpicked by another writer whose work in itself is clearly inferior to one's own. And i have discovered that it is those with a inflated sense of their own talent that feel the need to denigrate another's work to boost their own ego.

So, kudos for the bravery and courage in this one!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Doodley

3 Weeks Ago

There are quite a few of us here. Stay around long enough and you discover who they are.
DuffyDreamer

3 Weeks Ago

So you are including yourself as contrary to amateur hmm
Doodley

3 Weeks Ago

I let my writing speak for itself. I hope your quill never tires. Have a good day.
funny how we just seem to blend in to your world,maybe there is a lot more people on here feeling what you write than you know

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


DuffyDreamer

3 Weeks Ago

Indeed it is. But how sweet life is to give us each our own specific temptations. -_-
 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

i guess your right,write some more so we can wallow in it,,lol
DuffyDreamer

3 Weeks Ago

Hah sounds like a deal!
No punches held? I can do that. I think. To criticism and praise, cheers! (that's a nod to your poem, by the way)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


DuffyDreamer

3 Weeks Ago

Hmm sounds like an interesting proposition Dan
Dan Cowan

3 Weeks Ago

I try to only propose interesting things
DuffyDreamer

3 Weeks Ago

Got to keep them intrigued somehow...

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