Rest

Rest

A Poem by Cheavel DeLuna
"

i peek into my head

"

Paints run together,

patterns in the sky.

Invisible appearances,

water painted rocks.

Birds the color of ideas,

soar through heavenly rivers.

 

Cobolt spirits flee through open mouths,

in search of better places.

But there is no place better,

than where you are now.

In the saltwater caves,

of unfathomable minds.


© 2010 Cheavel DeLuna



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wonderful use of word choice and free form. i love the style ur going for in ur poetry. its very new age, almost hippieish however with a wide vocabulary of a scholar. it reminds me of jim morrison or ram daas. id really love to read something from u that paints a picture however, something that puts my in a room with the situation. Try to bring in the senses

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Very good. I like it alot your view into your mind is vagur but complex at the same time, the imagery could be seen broadly in my mind in many different aspects, similar to how a mind works lol very good poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful use of word choice and free form. i love the style ur going for in ur poetry. its very new age, almost hippieish however with a wide vocabulary of a scholar. it reminds me of jim morrison or ram daas. id really love to read something from u that paints a picture however, something that puts my in a room with the situation. Try to bring in the senses

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely love this! Every line is wonderful! I could really picture your words in my mind, and they're beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: rest, sleep, color, lines, birds

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Cheavel DeLuna
Cheavel DeLuna

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