The Decider

of..me?

I am the air

I cannot be the air when I am busy being the

Breath

That beats and entreats the love between two

Liars

I travel in green fume like cheap gas station perfume that knocks the socks off

While he tries to get his rocks off with a rapist’s grip

 

I am ashamed that I have been used to educate these

Swine

When I could have used my time to suffocate these lies between these lines

I blew through the trees

I ran through the leaves

And now I believes that I spend more time as pollution in motion

Rather than ideas of positive emotion

I am

Reviews

[limbalring]

You seem to be, quite simply, a beautiful collection of traumas.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

It is a liberating feeling when one decides to decide...you'll beat humanity to a pulp with your lines

[.]

I am confused but it's ok..your a conundrum..but an very interesting one..

[serpent]

wtf! who are you? Did you write lyrics for Pink Floyd? or Rolling Stones maybe...
i am blown! i cant really feel my eyes...you know...i know they are there...but i cant feel them...the piece was a fusion of quite a few elements that gave it a very surreal and subtle perhaps aggressive flavor to it!

[Tony]

I know.
I don't think we are from here either.....
.....pollution in motion....
"I travel in green fume like cheap gas station perfume that knocks the socks off"

Yup, this guy is way better than average.
For a hastily created carbon based life form, left to it's own devices....

Poe-etry.

[kuru]

this is quite evocative..."I travel in green fume like cheap gas station perfume that knocks the socks off
While he tries to get his rocks off with a rapist’s grip"....I really like the ending and the whole feeling you bring with the layout ...nicely done!

[Michael of Gilead]

And so are we all in indifference....

[Ashley Myers]

youve got a new fan lol good stuff

[GreenSkeleton16]

heyyyy that is good! :) keep on writing !

[Doreen]

We do choose to be what it is we're to be, don't we. This had a nice rhythm to it. Nice read.