DON`T HANG YOUR PANTIES ON THE LINE

DON`T HANG YOUR PANTIES ON THE LINE

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

 
DON`T HANG YOUR PANTIES ON THE LINE
 
Don`t hang your panties on  the line
All the dogs and kids in town
Know the signs and all too well
Don`t play those games like kids
 
Men and women know the words
Take my hand she says
He says your fine
Games of chess are for the birds
 
Don`t hang your panties on the line
Unless your in school
And don`t have time
For simple language it`s still cool
 
----  Eagle Cruagh


© 2014 Eagle Cruagh



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Hiya Mr. :]s
I was reviewing some of my work here and wanted to thank you or again for your very motivating comments on my various posts.
I really appreciate it, Thanks1

.... in reading this little delight, it occurred to me that you also might be accused of being a natural, complete with the proverbial no.2 stub in yer pocket ... for your interpretation.....
which, ... i don't know, you seem an awful lot like some of them old buckaroos that used to come around at gathering time, amazing me with their abilities with pocket knives and old pistols, and challenging my manhoodedness out there chasing some crazy red cow with a calf in the freezing rain on a big rockslide at 5500 feet above sea level.

Hopefully I'll be writing some new stories, I have indeed been out doing a bit of gathering, of a much more challenging type... you know, living in places where noone in their right mind would even consider .... lol ...
Good times, Be well.
Tony :]s

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The craft and line to the poem is simple, seemingly effortless, which belies the amount of effort which no doubt went into making it so. It is beautiful, simple and deceptively complex. Lovely work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really don't know what to think of this piece...the title pulled me to review it. However, it sounds a bit immature in the word choice and the meaning.

But, maybe that is the irony in this after all...

Posted 2 Years Ago


hm, maybe you have to be Irish to understand the "hanging panties on the line game" ... But i admit it has something seductive, a bit of the "Thomas Crown affair", but here the birds are playing chess ... hm, very mysterious

Posted 2 Years Ago


LOL! Somehow I found this very funny! a nice poem, I enjoyed the flow!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Nice piece of work! Truly enjoyed reading this, "games of chess are for the birds"
Holds so much truth, I use a similar phrase in my life all the time, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hiya Mr. :]s
I was reviewing some of my work here and wanted to thank you or again for your very motivating comments on my various posts.
I really appreciate it, Thanks1

.... in reading this little delight, it occurred to me that you also might be accused of being a natural, complete with the proverbial no.2 stub in yer pocket ... for your interpretation.....
which, ... i don't know, you seem an awful lot like some of them old buckaroos that used to come around at gathering time, amazing me with their abilities with pocket knives and old pistols, and challenging my manhoodedness out there chasing some crazy red cow with a calf in the freezing rain on a big rockslide at 5500 feet above sea level.

Hopefully I'll be writing some new stories, I have indeed been out doing a bit of gathering, of a much more challenging type... you know, living in places where noone in their right mind would even consider .... lol ...
Good times, Be well.
Tony :]s

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suck it up buttercup, don't get your knickers in a knot time to be a grown up. At least that is what I took away from this quirky poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eagle Cruagh

2 Years Ago

I sucked it up and it was good. The review that is.
Will not even try to explain what motiva.. read more

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