FROM A STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS

FROM A STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh
"

keep it simple stupid

"
FROM THE STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS
 
Cognitive limitations
 
1---Less is better
 
2---If our brains receive too much
      information we tend to choose
      the simple form:cognitive limitation.
 
If you list many clever sayings on your page
chances are none will be chosen.
List one or two and everyone will remember.
 
Write a story with many parts and few will read.
Write a four line verse and everyone will remember.
 
----Eagle Cruagh
 

© 2009 Eagle Cruagh


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What a very interesting concept, especially for someone like me who both talks and writes too much, never knows when to stop .. like now!

You never fail to surprise me with your writing, this and that pops out of your mind and surprises!

Thanks lots for sharing, John.



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Try my very, very latest!

What a very interesting concept, especially for someone like me who both talks and writes too much, never knows when to stop .. like now!

You never fail to surprise me with your writing, this and that pops out of your mind and surprises!

Thanks lots for sharing, John.



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply brilliant insights on the mind of the reader! Appreciate your willingness to share your thoughts with us here at the Cafe. We have an amazingly gifted family here, and through pieces like this we help sharpen one another. Thank you!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an intresting proposition...although it is like you are saying we are animals of simplicity. Is this what you meant? Or was it that we have short attention spans? On this I would agree and it is only getting worse with our appetite for more information at faster and faster rates. We want the news when we want it not when the station wants to show it. We want our internet connections to be fast and god forbid us being shut out of a site we love...then the shite hits the fan. I think we are a species that demands more and as we learn to multitask into the next generation of antisocial homebodies I wonder what the new world will look like?

Sorry I know I wrote a lot but it was very early in the morning...I need some sleep. :)

Tigra

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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