I Love You Already! >:O

positively NOT the best poem in the world. the rhyme pattern is stereotypical and the phrasing is crud but it needed to be out there.

Though I've been leavin' fingerprints
you just don't seem to catch the hints
While you just can't seem to get a clue
I've been fallin' in love with you

In this poem, as you should see,
I've been as blunt as I could be.
I don't expect a yey or nay.
not expectin' answers anyway.

Just wanted to get that off my chest
It's not a joke, my heart don't jest.
However cheezy this is to hear
Just keep in mind the words sincere

Whether you need friend or lover
I will be your bread and butter
Just a tad bit country to put it as such
but when you come from Texas, you can't help that much

So I'll grill up some steak and a table for two
some candles or maybe an old ocean view
Southern Lovin' is somethin' you can't escape hon.
I ain't lyin', my apple, we'd be pretty fun.

but if a friend's all you want and a pal's all you need
then i'm there for ya buddy. I ain't gonna plead.
Since i'm a little old fashioned so if you asked then why not
but if you're waitin' for me it'l take longer than thought.

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[EDRC]

I didn't realize you felt this way, Erica. -- Ryan.

[Anonomys]

wow. to just put your heart out there like that? ...your one brave person. good luck to you!