Turn to you

This is for the people who are in pain, we understand.

You've had a tough life, a rough start

you got the punishments of so many others

you were broken down, wishing for your dreams to come true

but you still are my inspiration

I was there when you needed a shoulder to lean on,

there to learn so many lessons

there to witness your dark side, your hidden secrets

but you still are my inspiration

i know you don't always trust me, but i'll always trust you

you like to be different apart from everyone else

your feelings show, but only to the ones you love

but you still are my inspiration

You may think your the bad guy, you don't know that your good

you may feel apart, but we are both the same

you don't think i understand you, but i always have

but i still admire you

and will always turn to you

Reviews

[Insanity]

I like this poem, it's nice. :) It just makes me smile, in a way, I don't know why, but it just does. Make me smile, I mean.

Just wanted to point out some mistakes. Errrrrrmmmm.... Right, the 'your' should be 'you're'. Some parts feel rather awkward if you say it out loud, maybe you could go over it and perhaps drop some unnecessary words or switch some of the words around, mix it up. XD

Love the poem otherwise, it was perfect. xP :P It was good. Just go over it and read it out loud and adjust it, I think it'll be a phenomenal piece of work. :D

[Sunny]

Nice work! It has a soft and nice feel to it and it does make you smile like Azah Lee said. Has a thoughtful feel to it.I love it
:)

[Sophie]

I really like this poem, beautifully written with a lovely meaning. It made me really happy for some reason so thank you! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice and funny and smart and kind and caring and yeah :) Thank you again

[ChocolateLovaa]

Awwweh. Kewl Poem EJB :) Thumbs Up 2 Ya!! Love From Your Biffle, ChocolateLovaa xoxoxoxo

[EJB]

made a mess up with plurals, whoops :) will fix now