Diary For my Reflection

Going through the harsh but realistic criticism ways of life as for appearance,materials ,and masculine trials of ones self.

   'Theirs the man picking up that rock because of his masculine ways ....

 Theirs the man who in a time of danger he possess the ability of fist .....

Theirs the man who people respect because he owns the ship everybody feels they need to have....

Theirs the man who's looks are as stunning as the moon on a dark and glacial night....

 For i have different possessions and attributes so i ask you what does that make me?

Reviews

[Hugo]

Look up the difference between there, their, and they're, but other than that, very nice poem.

[Kyla H]

Very nice&short, but I love the point!

[Zombie Waffle]

I like the idea - but I'm not sure about your use of "theirs", I think you mean to say "there's".
=)

[deepblue04]

amazing!

[Schadenfreude]

Very nice :)

[SeventhSin]

I really liked this :) Good job!!!

[BRAVE]

That is part of me there will be more to come......