Mother Is Alright

To congregate to concentrate

Mother Is Alright

Mother is alright she's mother

Every other mother dreams of sleep

Left to be completed on the other side

By mothers touch within itself if not in sight

The moon comes sooner than the afternoon or sooner

Is far away and stays that way when other mothers come

To congregate, concentrate on being who they are

Mothers stand together close to falling off

They dare not go too deep too far into the water

The cliff is near to stop them from a dive

To halt the march or thought of wondering

It is alright to be a mother and no more

Even when it's not

Mother is alright

Is she not

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

reads rather like a riddle to me ...hmmmmmmmm going to take a read or two more at different times of the day ... mothers do band together no doubt about it...me Mum knew things i did that only a few close friends knew about..i am sure it is the gathering of Mothers that give them that power .. and yes! me Mum is way alright :)))
E.

[Earl Schumacker]

Hi E. Thanks! As you know, I try to add certain layers to my works. It is difficult to fit a camel through the eye of a needle or create a true tempest in a tea cup. Who would want that? Where would the honey go? If you can have barrels of monkeys I figured how difficult could it be to create gatherings of moms. At least I kept them from leaping off the cliff. (They only go over the edge sometimes.) Have a great week end. Earl

[Einstein Noodle]

layered it is...i see those mothers who will sleep all day and ignore the crying babes; i see the mothers who can take no more of the pressures ..left to do it all on their own ..i see the cliff .. either barrier or a misconceived answer taken by some ... ohh Motherhood ... what would we do without it .. its merits not sung enough ;) (read it again:)