Ultra-Love

3 Ideas.

Wipe that guys blood off your lips before we f**k .



A space man crashed through my window n landed on my bed. there was a long silence.
n i said are you hurt? n he said hold me. so i held him.




Lets ride the train to space! Raring tearing around the universe circling the stars hush lila dont tell pops were never coming home! Woooooooosh
 

Reviews

[Bluet_Belle]

I love this:P

Its really short, and random, and it leaves a lot to the readers imagination:P

Its fun to think of whats going on in the sentences. Each is like a picture that were left to imagine what goes on next, or what happened just before and what not. It makes us(well, me) think.

Very neat, short and sweet:)

[sk8tagirl95]

dont really get the point

[ABBY]

sorry but i havnt ben so confused in my life. i just dont get this poem

[lark]

these stories are all sort of connectable. random but sort of... on a bigger plane, there's a thread.
reminds me of a clockwork orange, a little bit.

(and who doesn't love pete townsend?)
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[Hedra Helix]

first ones the fave, its only polite!

n i said are you hurt? n(o?) he said(,?) hold me. so i held him.

[Kerri[pollutes]]

haha

i don't get it
but, it's cute :]