Escapist

3 Ideas.

I stole into the first empty carraige and sat down. Did it follow me?

My head throbbed. Beads of sweat formed on my forehead.

I glanced perilously out of the window - no sign of horror. Slowly, I let my breathing return. I leant back. Number 6 there beside me. Number 6 watching me. Number 6 looking right through me. Number 6 collapsed on top of me i i i think i fainted.




she rolled into Thorntons and shouted " Willy Wonka "



Take the 49

Leave your umbrella behind

We're wearing top hats tonight!

Whooooo are you?

Whoo Whoo? Whoo Whoo?
 

 

 

Reviews

[Writeress]

I love it! The whole train thing you've got going on is quite entertaining. "Whoo whoo" Haha. Carriage 49. Thats a mighty long train. And the reference to Willy Wonka brings the reader into a world of surreal adventure and entertainment... like the film. I'm going to have to thinking about what this number 6 thing is though. Really snazzy bit of writing this.

[nostal]

Don't really know what it all means, but enteratinging and pleasurbale never the less. Good job.

[Voice11]

Unique. very unique

[Lynx]

I... really don't know what to make of this, although it is really interesting.

It seems like a movie play, seriously, it's like the beginning of the movie where we don't exactly know how it fits in together, although in the end it actually does in one way or another.

[Rachel]

I love this. It's so laconic that the reader has lots of room for self interpretation. It has a sort of drowsy feel to it, like the stories are just clippings from some level of intermittent consciousness.
Fanatastic, and thanks for the review.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

There's a lot more here than meets the eye and probably even you the good writer can see. A little of something for everybody. Good story!

Sal

[Chillbear Latrigue]

This was so bizarre I am not really sure what to make of it. It belongs in the script of a movie. It reminds me of one of something that Brad Pitt would say in Twelve Monkeys. I'm sorry if this review doesn't make a lot of sense, but I'm struggling to understand the piece. However, I enjoyed it immensely.

[Hedra Helix]

ooo first one for sure,
but all three of these really
but first one for sure. Diiggg