Story of scars

Story of scars

A Poem by Eden-Rose

I remember the day you left, tears were streaming from my eyes
I wondered if you ever loved me or if it was all lies,
If she'll make you happy, like I never could,
If you'd ever come back or if you're gone for good,
I wondered if it was me, was I the reason for this,
Then I punched the walls and cut my wrists,
I fell apart but I'm not like that anymore,
I eventually learned to pick myself back up, off of the floor,
But the scars remain and always will,
There is just somethings time cannot heal.

© 2017 Eden-Rose



Author's Note

Eden-Rose
This is an old poem I wrote after my dad left.

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Taz
Beautiful use of emotion all throughout this poem it is truely awe inspireing.

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Eden-Rose

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
Taz

1 Week Ago

All I did is what I always do, write the truth.
I love the last line... I love the whole thing. Great job

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

1 Week Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Yes there are some things that time cannot heal. I loved this poem it touched my heart. Thank you so much for sharing. Don't be so harsh on yourself. Time cannot heal things but surely can heal you. Have faith and be strong.

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Eden-Rose

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Najam Us Saher

1 Week Ago

You're welcome ☺
"Until you are broken, you don't know what it means to be a real person. It gives you the ability to build yourself again but stronger than ever." Quite extraordinary piece, once again. I absolutely love your work!

Always, Gina

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Eden-Rose

1 Week Ago

You are always too kind, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.
Gina

4 Days Ago

No problem, your work is always a pleasure to read.

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