She Asked Me Whats on My Mind

Everything and Nothing at the same time

She kept asking me what i was thinking.

and i. when i spoke i gave her a painting.

pain you hear it "tingg"

my words always to sharp

the sting. pierce.

cut up when you don't give me enough.....

time.

see i rather you stay off the edge of my tongue

your patience might bleed dry...

this time...

watch it sometimes, im unconscious 

that your thinking of what's conscious

in my mind...

but as fast as you blink i would have thought a million times...

so be careful in the meantime when you ask: Love what's on your mind?...

#EdetSiraRamblingPoetry

#makelovevisible

Author's Note

i was gone for some time,but try to get back going ... remeber i love comments ...opinions
and tis love is all

Reviews

[Ruth]

Always a tense moment, of sorts, when that question is asked...yet if asked...all we can do is reel it off, smiles :) Hope you are well hon? x

[Pryde Foltz]

but as fast as you blink i would have thought a million times...
so be careful in the meantime when you ask: Love what's on your mind?…

Those thoughts can be cutting at time, for sure. Whenever you can think nothing. Great one.

[Baby Ricochet]

Aristede!!!! Good to see you back bro. Good free verse piece on the question chicks always, and I mean always ask. "What are you thinking about?"

[Sami Khalil]

Good to see you back writing in vigor and answering questions. Bravo, sir...:).................