Songs of Indifference

Songs of Indifference

A Poem by Edward Clay

Birds forever sing
their distant day dreamer songs;
lost amongst it all.

© 2008 Edward Clay


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hmmm...your haikus are beginning to change my opinion of them. these are so good!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet, but very profound and true. Birds are always singing, and it blows right on by so many these days. Thus comes the line "stop and listen to the music" One might learn something if they did. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, I love a good Haiku, and I don't get to read good ones very often. I really like it-- thank you for sharing with us.

~Nana Carmine

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely, lovely haiku!

I've often thought this as well, and I've longed to join their world while wondering what they'd think of ours.

Perfect haiku crafting, leaving so much for me to create from it too!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Edward Clay
Edward Clay

The land of wherever, just south of Nowhere.



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