Colors of our love

Colors of our love

A Poem by EdwardBlue

In Gods name I pray , Not for you . 
But,
The freedom to allow us to purge the pain of loss,
without the need to take the colors of our love,
And paint Demons above our brows.
blending, mudding the lovely vivd colors
We created
To a black veil , To hide the entrance 
To the depths of your soul.

© 2011 EdwardBlue


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Your poem stirs my thoughts, as I read it... I wonder if love can ever be Perfect...The answer is "no"...Love is complicated. So I see your perspective in this, but, I am optimistic about love...At some point there will be complications, and that "black veil" will overtake the depths of the soul...if you let it...or... you can take the black veil and turn it into the veil of truth (why hide from the darkest color of all)... it can enrich the relationship to the fullest...growing together as you nurture the imperfections. Very thought provoking... Nice write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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nice poem, some spelling errors, but still...

Posted 7 Years Ago



I like the phrasing, the concept, the execution was nearly splendid. I liked how it felt murky, in between boundaries, hunting borders, attempting something new.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Perfect imagery! Love can be a vibriant color, when all is going well, but when things go wrong love can turn ugly as the color black! Hopefully if love is true on both parts it can be reverse back to a beautiful color of love! excellent poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem stirs my thoughts, as I read it... I wonder if love can ever be Perfect...The answer is "no"...Love is complicated. So I see your perspective in this, but, I am optimistic about love...At some point there will be complications, and that "black veil" will overtake the depths of the soul...if you let it...or... you can take the black veil and turn it into the veil of truth (why hide from the darkest color of all)... it can enrich the relationship to the fullest...growing together as you nurture the imperfections. Very thought provoking... Nice write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Love can be strange. Well said!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Mmmm... I like it Edward... because all can become black when the heart is broken open in loves loss... :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Love is a strange game...playing inside, it often makes a move smarter than we anticipate...a poignant piece...liked the phrase 'black veil' and its appropriate usage...nice expressive poetry

Posted 7 Years Ago


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