I don't like this

I don't like this

A Poem by Effector Prime
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When you know things are coming down already even as you phrase the next thing to say.

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Fools gold
I like it when you ask me to turn the volume up
I like it when you ask me if I like it
I like it when you ask me when I smile
What's up

Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah
Between sunset and sunrise
Then slept, four chambers
Some of them squeezed shut
To accommodate your splendor
You never miss anything.. :D

For I dread it happening
Well, for you never miss anything

© 2016 Effector Prime



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I liked this poem a lot.
"Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah
Between sunset and sunrise
Then slept, four chambers
Some of them squeezed shut
To accommodate your splendor
You never miss anything"
The above lines. Solid and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

To read such words from the Coyote himself... I am still digesting and processing the nutrition from.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

A amazing poem my friend and better to dodge death. Death comes when death wants.
Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

Aye indeed. For that reason I will hold still, I will live.



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For I dread it happening
Well, for you never miss anything

We get so besotted with some people we give them all our controls. Then we dread it happening but it happens anyway. A very deep and thoughtful write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

Totally. In this I have depicted of the one thing that truly freaks me out about a girl-friend: doin.. read more
I liked this poem a lot.
"Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah
Between sunset and sunrise
Then slept, four chambers
Some of them squeezed shut
To accommodate your splendor
You never miss anything"
The above lines. Solid and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

To read such words from the Coyote himself... I am still digesting and processing the nutrition from.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

A amazing poem my friend and better to dodge death. Death comes when death wants.
Effector Prime

1 Month Ago

Aye indeed. For that reason I will hold still, I will live.
So this poem is written about sophie?

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Namrata

1 Year Ago

Her picture maybe.
Namrata

1 Year Ago

Her picture maybe.
Effector Prime

1 Year Ago

It was fr her by all means

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Added on August 12, 2016
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Effector Prime
Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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