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A Poem by Effector Prime

pleasse dont leave me baby
please dont leave me again
if you dont want me now baby
i'll wait till you want me forever
please dont crush your eyes shut
with your fingers bent and stuck to your temple


© 2016 Effector Prime



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So tragic...so final...where does all the emotion lead us? I wonder sometimes. A powerful write Effector.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writing coming from a state of being weak and needy. That can feel terrible. You projected the whole scene on the screen with the last line. Good one.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 5, 2016
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Effector Prime
Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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