In the end

In the end

A Poem by Effector Prime

Like light that flowers
In the darkness of space travel
In a void of boundless measure
Into a soft bright corner

I spoke countless things
That invoked only your endless anger
You let mine subside
You swallowed it all
Let me swallow yours
Please let me, I cherish yours

Mine was unfathomed
Lonely I was only hungry for your
safety but not demeaning I swear
You weighed me down too with my secrets
I tend to not remember
It hurt
And it was a beautiful hurt

You bloom in your corner my angry goddess
my petaly angel my flower my sprite
In me sprout yellow daggers and they draw my blood
I feel them
And I will for all eternity please forgive me
I know why you think I'm alternating
Forever changing

© 2017 Effector Prime



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I feel the depth of pain and sadness of your plea for understanding and forgiveness in this poem. Eloquent, honest, passionate words to a lover...beautiful flow, cadence and tender,ethereal imagery- "my petaly angel.." I am won over- I hope she was as well! Excellent poem.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

3 Weeks Ago

She's a mystic beauty



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I feel the depth of pain and sadness of your plea for understanding and forgiveness in this poem. Eloquent, honest, passionate words to a lover...beautiful flow, cadence and tender,ethereal imagery- "my petaly angel.." I am won over- I hope she was as well! Excellent poem.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

3 Weeks Ago

She's a mystic beauty
"You weighed me down too with my secrets
I tend to not remember"

Best lines. Old women say share your burdens to lighten them, but too many times shared secrets become even more burdensome to the teller, not the keeper.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An apology so heartfelt ...I feel the sincerity and depth in each line. Great, powerful expressions Effector. This will bring her back. 👍

Posted 8 Months Ago


Effector Prime

8 Months Ago

Naa lol it was "the end" wernt it

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Effector Prime
Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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