Mushy alert! Mushy alert! Code red!

Mushy alert! Mushy alert! Code red!

A Poem by Effector Prime

For my love..
For my love was faulty

For my love,
For my love was flawless, yes...

Tossing and turning over
My tears drop no more

What do I have left, but my ways
Beams don't burst in my eyes
The clamors have ceased
Their deafening dangers

But it's much better
Than drowning disbelief
Insomnia and dysentery
Still can't digest your cruelty

What do I have forth, but what you've left me
Beams don't burst and blind
I'm now alone, now a loner,
code red, duck for cover

Mushy alert!
You sound gentle
Mushy alert, you sound
like you are in love again

Is it just the same for you
I know it wasn't easy
I love you

code red! please stop it hurts
Code red.

© 2017 Effector Prime



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Reading the poem again, I thought how often and how badly we misread people. Leading to such heartbreak. Fine expressions, Effector.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Effector Prime

5 Months Ago

https://youtu.be/trinU3VD1Zo
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5 Months Ago

Sounds like such an amazing twist in the tale. I hope you feel better soon :)
Effector Prime

5 Months Ago

Thank you : )
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If people love each other then why do they leave? What crazy compulsion on this earth drives them to do so? Many questions run amuck in my mind as I read the poem. Superbly expressed.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

7 Months Ago

It ran deeper than just crazy, Divya. A kind of crazy that loved me so much that it set me free. And.. read more
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7 Months Ago

Ah, now those will be hers to keep. And you'll have to cherish the pieces. I think it works out all .. read more
Effector Prime

7 Months Ago

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKcLmZz4sYY

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Added on February 22, 2017
Last Updated on November 5, 2017

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Effector Prime
Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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