Mushy alert! Mushy alert! Code red!

For my love..

For my love was faulty

For my love,

For my love was flawless, yes...

Tossing and turning over

My tears drop no more

What do I have left, but my ways

Beams don't burst in my eyes

The clamors have ceased

Their deafening dangers

But it's much better

Than drowning disbelief

Insomnia and dysentery

Still can't digest your cruelty

What do I have forth, but what you've left me

Beams don't burst and blind

I'm now alone, now a loner,

code red, duck for cover

Mushy alert!

You sound gentle

Mushy alert, you sound

like you are in love again

Is it just the same for you

I know it wasn't easy

I love you

code red! please stop it hurts

Code red.

Reviews

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Mmmmm.....
Bubblegum they think love is?...chewing at first, the sweetest flavour discloses and in just few minutes...swoooosh! Am saying it for the one who left you...... however a ray of hope always rises!! Something special awaits for you may :)
Thanks for sharing this :)

[Effector Prime]

I hope so too. Thank you for you kind and lovely review Tahsin : )

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You are welcome, already! :)

[Effector Prime]

You captured my remorse so well with your short anecdote... So perfectly well. You are something else. You bridged what I omitted in my poem. The ray of hope never "rose" however, but you were spot on even there. Hope was just forgotten. It needed to be brought back. Bubblegum... That makes such perfect sense to what she had done to me to her soldier

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Haha.... that's done totally unwilling by me...I mean that bridging....but am happy that Bubblegum made sense....Just wanted to bloom a joy in that dripping face... :)

[Effector Prime]

Aye the subconscious. The super watches

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👀...... :)

[DIVYA]

Reading the poem again, I thought how often and how badly we misread people. Leading to such heartbreak. Fine expressions, Effector.

[Effector Prime]

I know : ( She let go off my hand, and sunk for me. She wanted to save me from the thing that I loved about her

[Effector Prime]

https://youtu.be/trinU3VD1Zo

[DIVYA]

Sounds like such an amazing twist in the tale. I hope you feel better soon :)

[Effector Prime]

Thank you : )

[DIVYA]

If people love each other then why do they leave? What crazy compulsion on this earth drives them to do so? Many questions run amuck in my mind as I read the poem. Superbly expressed.

[Effector Prime]

It ran deeper than just crazy, Divya. A kind of crazy that loved me so much that it set me free. And in pieces. But what of my kisses? Code red she had said... When I was gentle.

[DIVYA]

Ah, now those will be hers to keep. And you'll have to cherish the pieces. I think it works out all for the best. We just have to let time handle it.

[Effector Prime]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKcLmZz4sYY