Anxiety

Days filled with anxiety not sure where to put it sometimes

Life's Anxiety

Encompassing all of me

Writing soothes my pain

Author's Note

Constructive Criticism please..... thanks!

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I understand... :/ I can see the 5-7-5 pattern, but I get stuck on the first line for some reason. Just a suggestion, as I don't know your heart, but would something like
"life's anxiety" work. Form is not something I even pretend to know well, so maybe you can't use a contraction... Hope you take this in the way it is offered...you did ask. You are doing a good job. Hang in there and write away that pain!

[EileenMarie]

I'm not wild about it either :) BUT I wrote it to get it out of my dam head lol. I am writing away the pain and it feels better. I like your idea so you will see the change in the first line!!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I like experimenting with form, but it muddles me rather. You do a good job with it. :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Its a haiku of sorts.... and its really good.. you incorporate all of you in every piece you write and your so right.. it does help sooth it all... great job !!

[zainul]

You have spoken my heart.
Wonderful work.
I can't write negative words in the name of constructive criticism.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! Some days are just anxiety days so I do the best I can and lately writing it out is what I need to do!

[zainul]

You did a great favor to me as well.
Actually writing helps release anger and frustration.
read moreYou did a great favor to me as well.
Actually writing helps release anger and frustration.
Keep on writing.
Don't care how the other peoples think about that.