Melancholy

Melancholy

A Poem by EileenMarie
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Acrostic

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Melancholy


Mood

Enervating

Lulls

And

Nearly

Causing

Hell

On

Lonely

Youth

© 2012 EileenMarie


Author's Note

EileenMarie
My first attempt at Acrostic :)
Constructive Criticism please...... Thanks :)


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A very good attempt.... great job.... and it was felt as well !! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


A successful first attempt...if enervating was enervates, this could have been a hybrid acrostic/senryu and you would have claimed a hybrid form ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Ummm ok ;) I'll have to check that out! Thanks for the review!
A very good acrostic for your first time......Well penned my friend......Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Wow that was fast! Thanks so much for your reviews :)

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