Charming

Charming

A Poem by EileenMarie
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To desire...

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Charming


Casually you slowly approach

Hesitating only to notice me

Affectionate teasing with your smile

Resisting the urge to flirt 

Mysterious feelings erupt

Indigo blue eyes seduce attention  

Naively losing myself in your glance

Gazing hopefully wanting more

© 2017 EileenMarie


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Hi, EileenMarie … such a fetchingly-alluring name.

I've always found a certain favor in the Acrostic Form; especially, when it's rendered well, and you've certainly done that with easy-flowing perfection, even smoothly, imaginatively fitting-in sensuality, with the vivid touch of sensational appeal of sweetest desire … I love your skillfully-creative juices, M'Lady.
Your word-choices are impeccable, and line-breaks spot-on … a masterful composition, indeed!

Ahhh, the sweet lure of irresistibly-imaginative spontaneity … what better to peak one's desire in delicious sensations of sensual arousal! ; )~
Thank you, EileenMarie, for sharing the incomparable You with now happy Us! ⁓ Richard



Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like the way you did this. It expands my thoughts on charming...makes me think of the magic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you :).... Yes he was or is a charmer & charmed is way into my life for a short but emotional .. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

11 Years Ago

They can do that.
EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

I also wrote a Nonnet called Charmer :) I guess he has been in my mind lately
Clever definition of the word "charming".
Its a Nice little poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
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Great job :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)!
I love all the lines.
Nice

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Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.
beautiful ....good job

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Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

I first wrote this as a Nonnet and someone suggested I put it in Acrostic so I tweeked it a bit....... read more

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A little about me and my life....... My name is Eileen my middle name is Marie but my dad always called me EileenMarie so.... I am 55 and have 2 great kids. My son is 23 graduated college, living on h.. more..

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