Time alone

Time alone

A Poem by EileenMarie
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Intimacy shared between 2 lonely people

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Unexpectedly, it all began
Two people longing for comfort
Enjoying time together
Intimate moments shared
Senses awakened
Desire looms
Relaxing
Touching
Kiss

© 2015 EileenMarie


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Yes indeed, given the right circumstances a natural magnetism can evolve between two people to pleasurable effect!

Short yet alluringly penned !





Posted 7 Years Ago


EileenMarie

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I find that I write well in shorter poetry.
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How true is this piece. It is feeling lonely even in a marriage that drives people to adultery. Great job of capturing the longing to be loved. N.

Posted 7 Years Ago


EileenMarie

7 Years Ago

Thank you... Not adultery but rather unable to commit due to life responsibilities. Its nice to not.. read more
Nicely-captured piece many can relate to, the space-filler in the drawer of time and surface needs.
A moment, however beautiful, of convincing ourselves, "I can make it."

Thanks for the share

Posted 7 Years Ago


EileenMarie

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I am trying to make it that is for sure
Ohh ohh. Passionate, seductive and blazing. Good end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

7 Years Ago

Thank you for you reading and your review :)
When a friendship blossoms into a romantic relationship, it is most often a lasting one. Two people finding each other and curing their loneliness...heavy sigh....always a great subject for a poem. lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I love your writing & I value your opinion :)
Not by design but unexpectedly, that is the way the best things start. Senses awakened, tuned in to each other. Less is more, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Im grateful I can write my feelings & have others "get" it 😊
Philip Muls

7 Years Ago

I would appreciate your opinion on my story Ether if you have the time. Kind regards Philip
I can relate to this on many levels. I have been there where I've met someone with the same wants and desires. Yet, haven't met the one to keep by my side :) I like this write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm
Glad you liked it!! Someday we'll meet the one we don't want to be without
Life depicted in most wonderful manner, simply loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Short and to the point is my style but I do choose my words to express my feelings perfe.. read more
A. Amos

8 Years Ago

You're most welcome and you sure do:) hope all is great with you.
Very nice time and expressed just as nicely. Well done and we know I like short verse.

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

8 Years Ago

I do much better reading and writing shorter poems. This one is a Nonnet. 9 lines, 9 syllables dow.. read more
Short but sweet and to the point.
Simply a short little piece about 2 people, simply seeking each others love and comfort.
Very romantic, emotional and beautiful write :)
I enjoyed it

Posted 8 Years Ago


EileenMarie

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will return the favor. :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Your welcome :)

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