Family extended

Adoption, family secrets uncovered , love, life, adoption

Life has a way of surprising you

A decision made for one thing

Has opened a new chapter

Adding missing pieces

A new found sister

And family

Filled with love

Sharing

Me

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the theme....the feeling of this...that giving of love...and also the shape of the poem with the lines getting short...until it comes down to One word, like One love, and sharing with another One.

j.

[Philip Muls]

Doors closing, other doors opening. Back to the core, which is family.

[EileenMarie]

Yes exactly! Thanks !!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Having lost my older sister, I am down to two siblings. Family is the core of us all, without it there is nothing to tether us.

A profound message you've given us, EileenMarie...and a most impressive form!

[EileenMarie]

Oh I'm so sorry I just saw this review'! Family isn't always blood.. I'm adopted .. It's who loves you no matter what! But I did find my biological sister & I feel so lucky! She's the best!! Thanks!!

[Tom McRoberts]

I really like how the line lengths steadily decrease, almost as if they were being refined, focusing on the poem's core "Me". Great stuff, keep it up!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!! It's a Nonnet .. 9 lines, 9 syllables down to 1.. It's my favorite style!
I really loved your review

[Tom McRoberts]

I hadn't heard of Nonnet poetry, thanks for the tip. You're welcome.