Black Monday

Black Monday

A Poem by Final-Karma
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Let me fill your minds with my thoughts.

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I found the love of my life in a coffin at the bottom of a lake
With a noose and anchor
That's where secrets stay

A tragic memorial
Such a festive event

Silver lining spent
I'll never forget

Lay down your hands on barren skin
Life over life we all stand still
A place laid in ruin but teeming with life

Where did time go? 
Was it only a facade?

This fateful melody played on heart strings so soft
Calm but loud I hear the heart beat drop
I scream for one sound

You





© 2017 Final-Karma



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Great read. Dark and sad. Love the way you ended it. "Calm but loud I hear the heart beat drop
I scream for one sound
You" Great work!


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you!
*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

A uniquely singing poem... Rhyme and breath are superb... A heart beat dropped... You... Quite excellent...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much!!
Silente

1 Week Ago

A pleasure

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Added on November 6, 2017
Last Updated on November 7, 2017
Tags: life, death, time, light, dark

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