Time's Passing

Time's Passing

A Poem by Final-Karma
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A culmination of time.

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If someone wrote a story about me
It would surely be a grand one

Schemes about life and chases
Moving from place to place

Anchoring my soul to the wind

If someone wrote a story about me
It would surely be a tragedy 

Full of despair and love
Chaos and loss 

Leaving my ship ashore

If someone wrote a story about me
It would surely be the last one

Worn out pages and broken spine
Dust settling on a forgotten soul

Something longed but never obtained 

I lose myself to the sway of the world

If someone wrote a story about me
It would surely be about us

© 2017 Final-Karma



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This was amazing! I can't even tell you how much I loved this! It really got me thinking about my story, I don't mean that in a selfish way, but I truly value works that get me thinking about my own life or that I can relate to. My absolute favorite line was "If someone wrote a story about me
It would surely be a tragedy Full of despair and love Chaos and loss" it was so beautifully written and it all just flowed so nicely. This was very well written, I can't spot any mistakes which is very impressive and it flowed very smoothly. This is an absolute gem and I loved every minute of it. I will be definitely adding this to my favorites list to re-read in the future.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! You're reviews are always amazing. I want my writing to make you think in that se.. read more



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I like it because it is relateable. The truth of life is all of our stories have good and bad in them. We have that tragic story to share and one with boundless joy.
Life sometimes leaves us ragged and worn yet soaring free.

Posted 4 Days Ago


This poem was amazing in so many different ways. Each of the stories could be tied together creating one beautiful trilogy. It was an amazing read and I enjoyed every second of it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

This really means a lot to me. It makes me happy that you understood. Thank you so much! I hope you .. read more
the mortality of time, the reality of perceptions of self and the thought of someones perception of your life. Very intriguing. interesting read. thank you, much appreciation! Namaste!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. You understood the meaning perfectly.
This was amazing! I can't even tell you how much I loved this! It really got me thinking about my story, I don't mean that in a selfish way, but I truly value works that get me thinking about my own life or that I can relate to. My absolute favorite line was "If someone wrote a story about me
It would surely be a tragedy Full of despair and love Chaos and loss" it was so beautifully written and it all just flowed so nicely. This was very well written, I can't spot any mistakes which is very impressive and it flowed very smoothly. This is an absolute gem and I loved every minute of it. I will be definitely adding this to my favorites list to re-read in the future.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! You're reviews are always amazing. I want my writing to make you think in that se.. read more
Yah, I can see the time is passing in astronomical ways ..

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much. That was the goal
"Moving from place to place
Anchoring my soul to the wind" This is lovely. Good piece of writing. I feel you can add something to the last stanza but that is just an opinion. :)
I would appreciate if you review my writing as well.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! I kind of left the end open on purpose just to leave room for thought. I will def.. read more
Inthemind

1 Week Ago

Good piece of writing. :) Please do take a look and give me suggestions, im new to this website.

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Added on November 7, 2017
Last Updated on November 10, 2017
Tags: life, death, time, love

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