Her Epilogue

Her Epilogue

A Poem by Final-Karma
"

On this night, our dreams come true

"
Under the solemn moonlight

A shadow creeps over marble white
Staining it's traces
Claws reach from the depths
Figures stand with no faces

Her beauty protected

All she sees is golden

The wolves gather in mass
Witnesses to the end
Innocence killed in ornate style
Forever alive among the dead

She never breaks her smile

Lights hugging every curve

Caressed by it's cold embrace
The emissary of life
Leaving her hollow and in place

The circle tightens 

Her dreams fade

Under sullen skies
This is her time of pleasures 
Turned grim and dismay
As one, the voices sang

"Give unto your life for this cause

O, woe is thee 
For what comes next is unseen

We invoke you this night

Our master of morning light"

The howl of winds so strong
Ascendence cut short
Overwhelmed in a sea of flames

She drowns in beautiful misery

Deprived of ugly remorse

Displays of elegance in torn form

Preserved

Her beauty amplified
Shared among the pack
Her innocence 
Crimson red

Shrouded 

Under this dreaded moonlight

© 2017 Final-Karma



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When it comes to poetry I tend to be into nonsense verse and surrealism and this seems more like occult poetry with weird fiction overtones. But I really liked it the tone was wonderful, and sustained throughout the piece. while the language itself was engaging.

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you got the synopsis of it. My goal is to engage a bit more and have the.. read more



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I love the story of this poem, the words were selected flawlessly! And it is a painting so vivid in my mind, it is as if I was there myself. Thank you for this one, as I am not surprised at how wonderful this is. ~namaste

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This is a nice work ❤❤beautiful and dramatic .

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Final-Karma

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Thank you! I really appreciate your review.
I really loved this. It was beautifully haunting.

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1 Week Ago

Thank you!
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Whilst reading this I listened to Greensleeves which is said to be composed by Henry the 8th - that just made this so beautiful. I thought this was beautifully written, I loved the tone and the themes of life and death that you used. I don't know how you do it, but every poem or work that I read of yours is always so well written and a joy to read! I just wanted to let you know that I hope the read requests keep coming because I just love your style of writing and the themes that you pick - they are really up my street and I have enjoyed reading each and every one of your works. I can't tell you how stunning your descriptions are (I know, I know I always say this) but it is true, your descriptions are just always on point, and it makes your works so magical. Looking through this, I cannot find any faults. A very beautiful poem that really captured my interest and another one of your stunning works that I can assure you will be added to my favorites list. Thank you so much for sending me a read request for this, I am so glad that I got to read it as it is really very good. You should be proud of yourself, it is stunning. Thanks again!

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You are always so kind! Thank you for loving my work as much as you do. Every time I submit a piece .. read more
Exquisitely beautiful despair. Dancing easily through the shadows till that sweet sweet suffering brings the high.

Lovely Read

Matthew

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Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Matthew Kult

1 Week Ago

You are welcome

Matthew
The words are beatiful and it invokes alot of wonderful and sometimes haunting images. What is it about however this time I am not sure.
I love the mystery of it. I feel like all the clues are there for me to put together but right now they are slipping through my mind. I will have to ponder this one.

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Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

You are so kind. My end goal is get people wondering and to interpret my work in their own way and r.. read more
Somehow the poem reminded me of Joan of Arc standing up in faith against society. I like the flow of the verses and the strange combination of beauty and dread that they made me picture. Yet, I felt the dread of the moonlight at the start and serenity of being self-aware at the end. Can you explain what you intended with the reverse?

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I love your interpretation of my work. It brings out that sort of strength but acceptance of the end.. read more
When it comes to poetry I tend to be into nonsense verse and surrealism and this seems more like occult poetry with weird fiction overtones. But I really liked it the tone was wonderful, and sustained throughout the piece. while the language itself was engaging.

Posted 1 Week Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you got the synopsis of it. My goal is to engage a bit more and have the.. read more

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Added on November 11, 2017
Last Updated on November 13, 2017
Tags: life, death, time, tragedy

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