The Void

The Void

A Chapter by Final-Karma
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New life is brought into our world.

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It wanders over liquid plains
Trapped in this lasting darkness
Eyes mirrored with hope
Horns protrude with magnificence

Duran, The Husk 

Over lesser this duality splits
A breach to behold that carries life
What lies beyond these waves of silence?
The broken bones of destiny fleeting 

A final moment

Knocking on faiths door for an answer
Tap, rap, tap, tap
Chanting echoing its approach
Resounding cries and mumbled oaths

A message is given

"Cross the threshold
Lose your mind
Secrets to reveal
Mercy for the blind"

Accepting all that was 
The sway of perplex being
It enters the universe
Shedding its divinity 

Losing meaning of self

Three crosses lay sprawled 
Falling to knees uncertain
Left like a creature to crawl
It catches the flicker of fire

Duran, The Lost 

From the flames it reaches
Unholy author reads out
The words cut like daggers
It curls inside itself

A phantom of heaven

"Fall silent, dear Duran, trails
The grave beckons your mind
Until the snake stops eating its tail"

Sweet word's ordained with blood
Venom spit from loving eyes
Such a good mother who gave life
A final lingering cry

A New World is here

"Welcome, on mantles of dead
Duran, The Undying has come
Sing until the end
Our kingdom will blossom"

Lost among the echoes
Who is Duran to it?
Thoughts frozen in motion
A women approaches

"Duran is he who lives"
Her whisper brings peace
What a beautiful creature
Sparkles of light in her eyes

It feels estranged tones of warmth
It speaks for the first time

"Duran is I" 






© 2018 Final-Karma



Author's Note

Final-Karma
First entry of this very strange idea of mine but I hope it is enjoyed. Please leave your thoughts as always and I will return the favor.

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Hmm, interesting. This first part had me visualizing myself wandering aimlessly through an abyss only to find true solace throughout the struggle. You have an uncanny way with your writing and that's the appeal of you. So many situations in life have ambiguity and that opens the door for us to learn more overall. I'd say keep up this series because you certainly get the mind engaged in critical thinking. :) Nice work

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Final-Karma

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you! It is interesting that you say that because that is definitely related to the overall sto.. read more



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Its so poetic and full of life. I can feel the words like they are talking to me. I aslo like its arrangement. The line and stanzas are perfectly fit into each other. I love it

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Its great.I like it
Its poetically carved but then deeply telling a story that's so interesting.

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Final-Karma

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That is definitely my goal with this entire project. To weave a story between lines of poetry. Thank.. read more
Roy Lennic

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You are Welcome
Hmm, interesting. This first part had me visualizing myself wandering aimlessly through an abyss only to find true solace throughout the struggle. You have an uncanny way with your writing and that's the appeal of you. So many situations in life have ambiguity and that opens the door for us to learn more overall. I'd say keep up this series because you certainly get the mind engaged in critical thinking. :) Nice work

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you! It is interesting that you say that because that is definitely related to the overall sto.. read more

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Added on January 2, 2018
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