Passionate

Passionate

A Poem by Final-Karma
"

Sweet love of my life. You will always be in my heart.

"
The symbols of making 
Glisten drapes of concealed love
How I want this to last forever(never)

You created this mass
This vessel of pleasure(terror)
How I wish you would escape

Trapped
Spending your time
Wondering where the children have fled

I only wanted the good in you
So I carved it out
The bad, it remained 
It grew into something else

Kill it(I love you) Kill it(I need you) Kill it(Mine forever)

I will kill it all for you
My one true summer

It illudes me
These echoes of voices(Take me)
Sundered, my mind tortured
Bringing me closer to you

You shined so bright(Power)
An angel of light
So I clipped your wings 
In the dark

Caged
Spiraling in moments of fear
I cling to your image
Oh, how I wish you were here

I only wanted the best of you
So I saved it for last
The bad, it remained
It festered into the final....

Part of you

Kill it(I hate you) Kill it(You are nothing) Kill it(Take me away)

I will kill it all for you
My one true winter

But you left me dear..
So I left you near
Inside my home

Forever(never) more







 

© 2018 Final-Karma



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Final-Karma
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A very riveting piece you've written here. I find it akin to wanting a person's spirit to stay with you in a form you found them most loving in. Its like throughout the interaction the decisions you pondered drive your mind and heart in several directions emotionally. This shows you how many feelings we can possibly have as people, along with much more. Amazing work and keep on writing. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

8 Months Ago

The spectrum of emotions is vast and at any given time a person can experience one or more of them. .. read more



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This reminds me of a song, though this also reminds me of the uncertainty of the heart. Whispers are light though they carry weight to sway you into decisions. It's as if such catharsis was reached from the speaker though otherwise thoughts conflicted with better judgement. The funny thing about better judgement, though, is that at the end of the day it's all choice.

"You shined so bright(Power)
An angel of light
So I clipped your wings
In the dark."

This was powerful. This part could stand alone, though it added such depth to the poem. This seemed as if the speaker wanted to transmit such complex feelings for understanding. When all we know is up, then we can't fathom what's beneath. When all we know is joy, then we won't comprehend relief. When all we know is light, darkness isn't a possibility. Until now. Amazing work. Great read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

5 Months Ago

So well said! I am glad you liked this piece. It was a bit rocky for me because believe it or not, t.. read more
Laurierose

5 Months Ago

Of course, it was a delight!
quite lyrical. Your message is all so clerical.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
A very riveting piece you've written here. I find it akin to wanting a person's spirit to stay with you in a form you found them most loving in. Its like throughout the interaction the decisions you pondered drive your mind and heart in several directions emotionally. This shows you how many feelings we can possibly have as people, along with much more. Amazing work and keep on writing. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

8 Months Ago

The spectrum of emotions is vast and at any given time a person can experience one or more of them. .. read more
I don't know why but I feel like this would make a good rock song (someone like GreenDay singing it). Maybe it was the adlibs or maybe it was the elegant writing. I enjoyed it though, so thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

8 Months Ago

It was my intention actually. I use to be a writer for a band so just playing around with ideas. Tha.. read more
Wowwww this is really good. Like fantastic :D

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much!!
This is quite a nice poem..Actually the first line itself was indeed good...There were various things which i liked in this writing...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing.
Riddhi

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

9 Months Ago

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!

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Added on January 29, 2018
Last Updated on February 12, 2018
Tags: love, time, poetry, death, life

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Hello, I am Final-Karma. I dabble in the known and unknown. Please read my work and let your minds be expanded. Feel free to message me, I am always excited to speak to new people from all walks of li.. more..

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