The Dream

The Dream

A Poem by Elaina D.
"

Its just a poem about soulmates

"


The Dream  By Elaina K. Devlin   1/09/2011

 

 

 

 

In the dark of night 

She wakes to find

Though wrong or right

He's on her mind,

She dreams as she flies

as if the earth has no hold,  

And she sighs as

He welcomes her into his arms so close,

Whispering words so kind

for only her ears,

He smiles

And the world just disappears.

She stands at the edge of the sea

Allowing the mist

to hide all her tears

To wash away the heartbreak  

Of all of these years,

And the knowledge

Of so many sad goodbyes

And loss of her innocence 

From her pale blue eyes.

The mirror to her soul

Shattered in pieces.

And she wondered 

"Will I ever matter in this world full of hate,

will I ever be loved or is it to late?"

His voice comes to her from a distant memory

Phantom arms embrace her right there by the sea

She watches the waves safe in his arms

and for once in her life she feels safe from all harm. 

as she watched the sunrise and the new day begin

she put her past behind her and starts over again.

On that shore that had seen

All her tears and her pain

She smiled to herself and laughs once again

though she knew this was only a dream 

her heart told her true,

Somewhere in time was the man she once knew

then she heard his voice whisper once again

"It's time to awake my beauty,I'm waiting for you"

She opens her eyes to a bright new day

 and the first words she spoke was " I'll find you someday"

 

 

 

Time has no meaning when two souls are the same,

Love reincarnate never ends or so it is claimed !!!!!!

© 2011 Elaina D.


Author's Note

Elaina D.
I think this is a subject that most women think about from time to time ! This is the first poem that I have "put out there" most of the time with I write its romance,but never poems. I'm working on my first romance novel now, about modern day Scotland . Please be honest......but kind!

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I felt some of the lines were a little choppy when they should of been smooth. ex: ""It's time to awake my beauty,I'm waiting for you"

She opens her eyes to a bright new day

and the first words she spoke was " I'll find you someday""
There were also a few punctuation errors, such as missing periods or commas.

However, these words really connected to me, which I feel is a true feat, considering the fact that I tend to dislike Romantic poems.
Your work does a nice job of taking the idea and pulling the reader in.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great! I really shows how good you are, Great Debut, Mom!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This felt so feminine, sweet and actually, romantic. My favorite line of the day:

"Time has no meaning when two souls are the same"

awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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