This Thought

A musing and a collection of my ever ranging thoughts.

Time and time again,
A thought has crossed my mind.
It stops and whispers stories,
Turns its head as mine.

This thought, it makes me wonder,
What is right and wrong.
Who's job is decider?
Who can be called a god?

A true god would not change us,
Or deem us less than what we are.
A god would give us wisdom,
Not preach religious war.

He would give us freedom,
Not force us to believe.
Greed would fall behind us,
And fear would take its leave.

Heaven, hell, and that between,
He would say all souls are clean.
But most of all, a god would love,
Every.. little... thing.

Reviews

[Hoshi Nami]

this is really really good. god is a topic often taked about on here and sometimes it gets annoying but this has such a purity to it that makes it great. the only thing is the line "Who's job is decider?" - it kinda ruins the flow a little.