Games

This is a song I wrote after a breaking off a unhealthy relationship. capo 5 - C2, C4, C, G

C2
Capo 5
C3 C4 C G ??

Verse 1:
Tell me you don’t need me
Tell me you don’t love me
It’s sure is looking like you do.
Are you confusing your feelings for hate?
Oh I can see right through
Tell me how can you hate someone so much but still want them?
Why do you play with my mind the way do you oh you making me sea sick.

Pre-Chorus:
How do you make me miss the way

Chorus:
(The way) You touch me.
Want you to hold me
Make everything feel better
your to stubborn to say that you hurt me, so I can forgot you changing.
Your making me crazy so why do I still want you?
Why why why why?

Verse 2:
Oh you slaughter the meaning of trust or maybe love
The thought of you makes me longing home.
I see your eye catching mine as I walk passed your room.
I smile a bit remembering you laughing at my bad jokes.
You roll your eyes and shut me out, now I’m here all alone.
I’m used to being the card dealer but seems the table has turned
What are wanting from me?
I can’t keep waiting here. I’m done playing these mind games
Pre-chorus:
How do you make me miss the way...
Oh my god but why do I want you.
Chorus
(At end of chorus:
Oh I still I love you)

Author's Note

I wrote this in about 15 minutes. This guy really messed me up for a while. Any crisism and thoughts are accepted and appreciated. Thank you!

Reviews

[JayG]

It's not possible to critique song lyrics because the music is what counts, and the words are in service to it, with the performance supplying the emotional content. Lots of songs make little sense, but do well.

In 1974 the group America had a hit song called, Tin Man, that you heard being played everywhere, but it had a verse that said,
- - - - -
But Oz never did give nothing to the Tin Man
That he didn't, didn't already have
And Cause never was the reason for the evening
Or the tropic of Sir Galahad.
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That being said, a few points:

• Only motion can make you seasick, so that having mind games do that doesn't track.

• And you need to edit more carefully, because you use "your," where you really mean "you're," "to" for "too," "do you," for "you do," and "passed" for "past,"

If readers are going to give you of their time you owe them your "A" game effort.

[Eleise Trenda]

I didn’t even notice that! Thank you!