Passage from my current project

Passage from my current project

A Story by Elfinlocks
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This is a passage from my current work in progress. In this scene the character is in a ecstasy induced state at a rave. Just wanted some opinions.

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Slow rise.  Hopeless-sounding cascade.  Rising.  Beat thumping.  Lights flashing.  Euphoria.  Ascension.
Everything morphed into one throbbing mass of bright colors and sound.  Nothing coherent, no problems, nirvana.  Sweet, sweet drug-induced nirvana.  Tunnel vision, people, moving(maybe).  Blurring.  Transcendence.  People no longer people, just there.  Everything nothing, just there.  Dancing possibly.  Music.  Flashing.  Silence.  Darkness. 
Next song, break-beat, incredible.  Heart pumping.  Music thumping.  Energize.  Invincible.
Sweating, coherency, fatigue, song still going.  Can't stop.  Not now.  Fatigue.  Sweating.  Sickness.  Bathroom.  Stall door.  Couple attached to each other.  Vomit.  Darkness.  Blackness.  Lights out.

© 2013 Elfinlocks



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Elfinlocks
Highly stylized.

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Added on July 26, 2013
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Tags: drugs, ecstasy, rave, dancing, party

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