Autumn Love

Autumn Love

A Poem by Eli_blu

 

The leaves are swept away

in currents and oceans of wind.

Perfuming the air with sweet mustiness

and paitning the ground the color of autunm.

 

© 2009 Eli_blu


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Your poems are making me long for fall. I like your style. I like the comparison of the wind to the ocean. It fits nicely. A very nice write. And I'm looking foward to seeing more of your work.

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 Added on March 26, 2009
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Eli_blu
Eli_blu

Salt Lake City, UT



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