Color

Color

A Poem by Elijah

Sapphire starts the morning bright

Filling our souls with joy and delight

But darkning black controls the night

Loading our minds with tremble and fright

We decorate our yards with auburn trees

And then they're pollinated by golden bees

Crimson cherries fall onto the ground

As we pick them up the bees provide sound

Maroon uniforms fill the field

As the quarterback has the football in wield

Turquoise water fills the sea

As we sit on our boat drinking brunette tea

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Elijah


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What a vivid poem with beautiful imagery. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A poem about life and what surrounds us...the people, nature, seasons...a poem that teaches us to appreciate what is going on in the world. I really enjoyed the theme of this piece =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


A very colorful poem here...i love it.
Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow. I really like this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


great write i like it

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved this poem, even though it was so short you used rhyme perfectly without it feeling forced and the colours were all just so vivid to me I really like this :)

well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the brunette tea part,very creative

and delightful write such a treat to read

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

enjoyable read here like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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