Pearl

Pearl

A Poem by Ellie Elizabeth
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Gliding pearls on her skin, blinded in blood.

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Anemic Fingers pluck black cello strings and hold white, sallow pearls that you once kissed. The moths that leave your lips brush your hair and breathe your poison; they film your tongue and grow lush on your cheek.

I saw the blood that ran from your mouth as you kissed my hand.

You fall in a pond of pearls and cover them in a thick violet.

I kiss your rose cheek while you seep. You seep into my fingers as I hold you, and swallow violet pearls.


© 2012 Ellie Elizabeth



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I agree with the other reviewers, its unique and the imagery is excellently written in words. Great job, keep it up.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem! I love the imagery you put in it. My only real advice is for you to try to make your poems rhyme when you use this style of poetry. But still, nice work!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that is really wonderful. you have been drawing a very nice picture of slow romantic time..i have enjoyed this image...i have enjoyed the music beneath the words and the lines....i have enjoyed the flow and the words picking..

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magical!

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's giving a unique mental image. Wow.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 21, 2012
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Ellie Elizabeth
Ellie Elizabeth

San Antonio, TX



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I'm 16 years old, and i'm in love with writing and literacy education. Writing is one of the only ways, besides my art, where i can express how i feel with confidence. Even though i'm not the religio.. more..

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