The Expedition

The Expedition

A Poem by River Goats

We can build inventions --

Boats on the ocean,

Shuttles to a new land,

To a new idea

That meets us

With determination.

It calls out

Like northern geese

In migration,

But remains only

For a moment.

© 2013 River Goats


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well, that's an amazin' one man. I liked few words. You got me man. This's you know a piece..yeah it is a nice piece.
Beautifully expressed. well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


River Goats

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it.
I like the first line the best. I always think of inventions as being invented but never built for some reason. It's very lyrical and could also be a song. Nice little poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


River Goats

10 Years Ago

Interesting, because I built the poem around that line. Thank you for the review and kind words.

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River Goats
River Goats

Santa Rosa, CA



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I try to write about things like perseverance and discovery. I can't say if I write about serious things, or meaningful things; I just write about what inspires me. This is my account from a few.. more..

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